Hi, John!
How are you and, your family? What are you doing now? Do you have a. job? What are you doing in your free time?
I'm fine, thank you very much. I'm working at the moment, I'm writting you in my office. My favourite restaurant is with a. good, servis, good. meats, romantic, and clean, it's very important for me of it is clean. In my town, we have a restaurant, the name is Strada we can eat Italian food., pasta, pizza, good, salad But I would like to visit the new restaurant in gout town, I think it's very nice! Tette, me when we can meet for a good. dinner. We can inveted another friends to have a good. evening. I hope everythings are ok for you?
ALL whiches!
See you soon!

Lời bình: Đây là một bài viết cố gắng viết đầy đủ nội dung, nhưng từ ngữ dùng không được hoàn thiện cho lắm, điều này khiến người đọc phải cố gắng hiểu nghĩa cũng như một vài từ viết sai như "servis, whiches..."

Band: 3

Dear Eleonora,
Many thanks for your letter, it was really nice to hear from you again. It's such a long time since we wrote to each other. In your letter, you aksed me if I had a favourite restaurant. In my town, which is called Tours, we have lots of restaurants. But the name of my favourite restaurant is "La Trattoria". It's an Italian restaurant, which is situated in the oldest quarter where everyone goes to have a drink, but it's mostly frequented by students. I like this restaurant because we can have Italian food but also typical food from my area like cheese, foie gran (duck pate). The atmosphere is very pleasant because there is a soft music and the people who work there, are very friendly.
If you come in Tours, we will go to have a meal. I am sure you will love this restaurant.
Give my regards to your family. I look forward to seeing you soon.
Love

Lời bình: Đây là một bài viết rất tốt với sự tự tin và tham vọng về sử dụng từ ngữ, ví dụ: "It's an Italian restaurant ... frequented by students". Bức thư chứa nhiều cấu trúc và từ vựng khác nhau, ví dụ "the atmostphere is very pleasant", "the people who work there, are very friendly" và được tổ chức tốt với các từ liên kết đơn giản. Có một vài lỗi nhỏ, như "a soft music" nhưng không khiến cho người đọc thấy khó khăn lắm để hiểu nghĩa.

Band: 5

As you know I really like the hungarian food, so it is no question, where is my favourit restaurant in Budapest. Hungarian kitchen is quite spicey, but in my opinion, this fact made the Hungarian food well knowed, all around the world,. I like particularly one on the Danube's bank, where the sight 1-5 50 bUtl4.fout . You can enjoy the panorama of the Gelleit mountain, the Palace, and you can see the most famous bridge, the Chain-bridge as welt. The service of this restaurnat is very friendly, or as I used to saying: very 'hungarian” . The .1-00d, is fantastic, the waiters are very 11 , so you can get there everything, if you wart to have such it nice evening. Even if you are going there with your girlfriend, you can spent a romantic time together, and I am sure, she would, be very pleased.

Lời bình: Đây là một sự cố gắng khá tốt sử dụng ngôn ngữ hợp lý và trôi chảy, ví dụ "You can enjoy the panorama of the Gelleit mountain ... Chain-bridge as well". Bài viết có các cấu trúc ngữ pháp và từ vựng được sử dụng hợp lý. Mặc dù có một vài lỗi như "well knowed", "butufoul", "the waiters are very helpfuly" nhưng người đọc chỉ cần bỏ một chút nỗ lực là có thể hiểu được.

Band: 4

I was on the beach when my mobile phone rang I saw that may batery is Low & I didn't pick up the phone. On the beach I read, book and, I went to pub I -finished me beer and, I went to home about 6 p.m. I opened, my windows and, I went to step at 10 p . m . To-day I will, go to cinema. in the evning with my fri.ends. But in the morning car hit me and now I'm in the hospital, I can took that why I witering thos story so I'm really sory but not come to school, •In next week beacuase I'm not able. This is realy story from

Lời bình: Đây là bài viết tương đối nghèo nàn và gây khó hiểu do chuỗi các câu không gắn kết với nhau khiến cho người đọc dễ gây nhầm lẫn cũng như chứa nhiều lỗi về từ vựng và ngữ pháp, như "I can took that why I witering thos story"

Band: 2

I was on the beach when my mobile phone rnag. It was my flatmate. She was very nervous and anxious. She told me that while we were having holidays somebody came inside our flat. And he had stolen our computer and some cash! I was furious. 5o I went to home immediately. Our flat was in a mess. It was disaster! Both of us were crying. We phoned to the police office, half an hour later polices arrived. They asked something to us, but neither of us didn't know anything. Police man said to us, "Don't be afraid and worried about it". But we weren't able to like that. but 2 days later I was able to get the phone from police. The man who has stolen our computer was caught. He was a man who lived next door of us. Eventually we were able to bring back our computer and the man apologized us and moved another flat.

Lời bình: Đây là một bài tốt với việc cố gắng sử dụng ngôn ngữ nhưng ở nửa cuối bài viết có sự rạn nứt về liên kết khiến cho bài viết không được điểm tối đa. Ví dụ: "They asked something ... know anything". Bài viết cố gắng tổ chức một cách phù hợp bằng cách sử dụng các từ liên kết như "but", "2 day later", "eventually". Có một vài lỗi mặc dù không quan trọng lắm, người đọc có thể dễ dàng hiểu ý.

Band: 4

I was on the beach when my mobile phone, rang. I looked at the mobile, SGT.en but the number was unknown. I deceded to answer anyway. "Hello!' I said. "Hello, Mr Tandutkar, this is the manager of the 'Brooke' restaurant. I wanted you to know that the reservation of your table is confirmed_ at nine o'clock, this evening.' "What?' I asked. "I don't have any reservation, and. I didn't call you for booking any table for this evening!". "I'm sorry Mr Tandulkar but I have a reservation at your name, a woman called this morning and, she booked a table for two*. I was curious to meet that unknown woman, so I went to the restaurant at nine o'clock dressed, on my best suit. The manager brought me to the mysterious woman and I was anxious to meet her! I looked at her and, I was stunned) It was my sister! What a surprise. She wanted to celebrate her birthday! We had a. very nice evening but at last I've paid the bill!

Lời bình: Đây là một bài viết rất tốt với sự tự tin về cách sử dụng lối nói trực tiếp: "What?, I asked", "I don't have any reservation...". Nội dung câu chuyện được tổ chức tốt với mở bài, thân bài và đoạn kết. Có một vài lỗi nhỏ như "at last I've paid the bill", "dressed on my best suit" nhưng không khiến người đọc mất nhiều nỗ lực để hiểu lắm.

Band: 5