Something incredible!

Your English teacher has asked you to write a story. Your story must begin with this sentence:
As my friend and I arrived at school yesterday morning, we saw something incredible!
Write story in about 100 words

Sample answer
At my friend and I arrived at school yesterday morning, we saw something incredible! A huge dinosaur was sleeping in the middle of the playground! We couldn't believe our eyes. Although we were very frightened, we decided to quietly approach it. Just as we reached the dinosaur's giant head, it opened its big yellow eyes. We were so terrified we couldn't move! Then the dinosaur opened its mouth and we saw its long sharp teeth shining in the morning sun. We were about to start running when we heard somebody cry 'It's Dinosaur Day today!' We started laughing as we realised that the dinosaur wasn't real!

Comment
This is a good example of a story where the writer has paid close attention to the pronouns (I, we) used in the opening sentence and ensures the story follows the same pattern. The use of adjectives help to describe what the dinosaur looks like to make the story more interesting. It does not exceed the word limit too much (108 words).