Some good news

You have received some good news and want to tell your friend in Australia about it.

Write an email to your friend. In your email, you should:

explain your good news
say how you feel about it
ask about your friend's family

Write 35-45 words on your answer sheet.

Bài mẫu

Bài mẫu A

Examiner Comments: This is a good answer, dealing way all three content elements almost within the word limit. However, the line-by-line presentation al the sentences affects the readability of the message slightly. The message also ends rather suddenly

Band: 4

Bài mẫu B

Examiner Comments: In this script, the first two content elements are sucessfully dealt with, but the third (asking about the reader's family) has been omitted. The script can only receive 3, therefore. Language errors are minor and do not affect the clarity of the message, such as it is.

Band: 3

Bài mẫu C

Examiner Comments: This is an excellent attempt, covering all three content elements appropriately. Although the writer has slightly exceeded the word limit, the content is relevant and natural. The answer reads well and requires no °Hod by the reader.

Band: 5